Oh...This. Kicks. Ass. I BEG YOU TO WRITE MORE SOON!

Oh my fucking god...you have NO idea how much i love you right now. And I thought I wanted the next chapter, shit! ThIS IS SO gReAT! I love you! I love this! I had no idea! Of course, but that only means that your a fantastic authoress! FABULOUS!

O...M...G...I LOVED IT! it was perfect. it flowed, and the whole brother and brother thing is really cool! not many boys would like that kinda thing, but i know, like...the entire female population will love this story. So hurry up and write the next chapter. i wanna see what is happeneing!

touch to bring it back like that. I wonder why you don't want to do Jonah's POV every other chapter? You have your reasons, but I did enjoy it. I like how they're so different from one another and-how Jonah's so vulgar. Me like well placed vulgarity. I can't wait to see what happens at school! Update soon!

UPDATE. Completely awesome. I'm really glad that we got Jonah's POV. I was curious as to why he kissed back, but then threw him off. Definitely nice to get an explanation. Anywho, I do hope you update again just as quick. I'm loving it.

Oh my god...I abso-fuckin-lutley love this! OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! COOL! AHAHaha! He was so hard, and he was just rejected, oh poor baby! Wow, i can't wait for you to update so I Can read another chapter...you better do it soon, too. AH! OH MY GOD! If I was a guy I'd be so hard right now..:3. Unfortunately...

Ja ne little bunny! I love you and your greatness! You've got skill, wo! _

*loves it* I've been looking for good incest, and yay, you wrote some. I hope you continue SOON. I look forward to it.

Holy is an awesome story! You have to continue it, or I will be sad.D:

Okay, after reading the actual story, I must say that yea, your dirty but like I said I'm a dirty minded girl. So I liked it. You wrote it kinda like another writer does around here. I won't say who cause I don't wanna be shot and mamed. Good though. Keep it up!

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