Reviews for The Wrong Way
hanakimi chapter 16 . 2/10/2010
Awesomeness chapter 18 . 1/26/2010
Update soon please _
CinderellaWithCombatBoots chapter 18 . 1/14/2010, taking the last authors-note into consideration, does this mean that you're due for another two-year update now? It's 2010 and Please? :D

I love the story. I think the plot is good, and I like the way it's written, with the POV changes and time jumps. It keeps you interested. The characters are awesome too. A bit stereotypical when it comes to Kelly - except for the religion thing - but she's crucial in moving along the story, so I forgive you. Just kidding.

But you're an awesome writer, and in two years chances are you've gotten better (that is the way it works, right?) so I hope the story is continued at some point. It wouldn't be a waste of time. If anything, you'll have a nice psychopathic stalker to show for the completion of this story (i.e.: me)
hanakimi chapter 18 . 11/5/2009
Slash Rating chapter 18 . 10/13/2009
Jesus I love this. I love this so so so much, it's INCREDIBLE. It's amazing, you know. Shit, how did you do that? It was amazing.

I love Joshua like mad. (always had a thing for the crazy ones) I love how you brought through his personality, it's just so real and so there, you know? Wow. Oh god. Please continue this. It's so amazing.
MAGICAL.NARRATOR chapter 17 . 9/9/2009
"So Jonah has resorted to drinking…and I have resorted to this. What a mess we are, together and apart."

Every once in a while you drop these one-liners that just get me. This is one of them. Brilliant.

and this review marks #500!

I feel an undeserved sense of accomplishment. You wrote the story after all. lol.
MAGICAL.NARRATOR chapter 16 . 9/9/2009
I love Joshua's chapters. He's always so much more intense than Jonah and I love it. his thought always seem so profound, even when their not. lol.

1 more till five hundred!

MAGICAL.NARRATOR chapter 15 . 9/9/2009
The part where Nathan puts Jonah in a choke-hold has to be one of my favorite quotes from an story.

"However, this moment is quickly disturbed by a sharp pain to my neck and the sudden lack of oxygen. This new, annoying moment made possible, I believe by fucking Nathan. Who is undoubtedly taking me in a choker-hold. And will dearly pay when I recover my fading consciousness."


MAGICAL.NARRATOR chapter 14 . 9/9/2009
I love Janet. I think we would totally be friends... you know, if she were real.

and i think this is the first a/n thats made me laugh.

MAGICAL.NARRATOR chapter 13 . 9/9/2009
haha. I can totally see this becoming a steamy classroom scene.


and it only got better with Josh's pov.
MAGICAL.NARRATOR chapter 12 . 9/9/2009
I am so determined to get this story to 500 reviews. lol.

It's the little goals that count ]

and i love this scene.
MAGICAL.NARRATOR chapter 9 . 9/8/2009
I cant believe how real Barb's character is. It's astounding.
MAGICAL.NARRATOR chapter 8 . 9/8/2009
I have to say that you got the cycle of anger pinpointed exactly right.

Ive read this story before but apparently I didn't review, and it's just too awesome to only read once.

Hanakimi chapter 18 . 8/9/2009
Updation. It's a demand, woman.
hanakimi chapter 18 . 7/23/2009
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