Reviews for Stay With Me
diesoz chapter 1 . 2/25/2006
Wow, that's amazing. You have a true gift!
Sarah Elizabeth Julia chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
Cute poem. Good writing. Keep it up.
SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 5/2/2005
This is really beautiful, very well written! Thanks for reviewing! QueenVixta
Stories-have-souls chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
Deep and well worded. I love the description.
JSCreed chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
Sounds like you're asking for something that might not be able to be given back. You're promising yourself something to him, but he might not want to promise it
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
I liked it...tres sappy...(I'm such a sap) yet can't manage to write any sappy poems lately...Nice job!
Munchin chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
This is really sweet. I like it alot. As for adventures.. they are fun when others come along too. Even if sometimes you ahve to be alone.. I like this piece alot. Well done!
Arkash chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
Beautiful words, the meter is goo too.

Great job!
account not in use chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
Aw...I love it so much...The second stanza was beautiful.
AlwaysAmberella chapter 1 . 4/10/2005
this is so sweet, and kind it gives a sense of reassurance, and safety, in the mushy gushy love way. Awesome Job

Solo.
KwazyKandyPie chapter 1 . 4/10/2005
daw, how cute. you can sort of picture someone singing this. you write/type spiritual poems well. _i especially like these lines:"If you choose to stay with me

Together, we can learn to fly"

-kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/10/2005
A sweet whisper in you heart...your

very sweet love poem
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 4/9/2005
Emotional and beautifully done as always Kokoro-san! XD Keep it up, your skills have gotten better. -

!* Noelle *!
Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 4/9/2005
this is really emotional. It has so much words and feelings that are strong. keep it up!

Sorrow