|Reviews for Stay With Me|
| diesoz chapter 1 . 2/25/2006
Wow, that's amazing. You have a true gift!
| Sarah Elizabeth Julia chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
Cute poem. Good writing. Keep it up.
| SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 5/2/2005
This is really beautiful, very well written! Thanks for reviewing! QueenVixta
| Stories-have-souls chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
Deep and well worded. I love the description.
| JSCreed chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
Sounds like you're asking for something that might not be able to be given back. You're promising yourself something to him, but he might not want to promise it
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
I liked it...tres sappy...(I'm such a sap) yet can't manage to write any sappy poems lately...Nice job!
| Munchin chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
This is really sweet. I like it alot. As for adventures.. they are fun when others come along too. Even if sometimes you ahve to be alone.. I like this piece alot. Well done!
| Arkash chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
Beautiful words, the meter is goo too.
| account not in use chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
Aw...I love it so much...The second stanza was beautiful.
| AlwaysAmberella chapter 1 . 4/10/2005
this is so sweet, and kind it gives a sense of reassurance, and safety, in the mushy gushy love way. Awesome Job
| KwazyKandyPie chapter 1 . 4/10/2005
daw, how cute. you can sort of picture someone singing this. you write/type spiritual poems well. _i especially like these lines:"If you choose to stay with me
Together, we can learn to fly"
-kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/10/2005
A sweet whisper in you heart...your
very sweet love poem
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 4/9/2005
Emotional and beautifully done as always Kokoro-san! XD Keep it up, your skills have gotten better. -
!* Noelle *!
| Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 4/9/2005
this is really emotional. It has so much words and feelings that are strong. keep it up!