Reviews for Him and Her
FrankO chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
Why stop here, this is a great story/poem. And the rhyming is flawless. I say continue.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
leave it so! i like it! much more than the 2 things i just posted, lol! ;)
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 4/10/2005
wow pretty~~ the rhyming made this poem fun and enjoable to read~~ with just that hint of humour~~ i think it's good as is~~ Great job!

keep writing!
Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 4/10/2005
I think you should continue. This is really amazing work. It has perfect flow and meaningful words. Great job!

AlwaysAmberella chapter 1 . 4/9/2005
i love this, i think its totally original, keep it up...