Reviews for so cold
Moonjava chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
The description in this is really good. I like it.
Edraith chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
Short but interesting and there definitely is something to it, the rhymes make it almost sound like an incantation, and I like the way the last line falls out of that pattern, thus mirroring the content, the wish to break that spell of coldness. Nice little piece.
citrus scented chapter 1 . 4/27/2005
i like it. very effective, i like the flow to it- it ties up neatly and has a kind of errie feeling to it.
obsidian katana chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
oh man i know the feeling. especially when your nails start to look like you painted them purple. nicely conveyed here. i like the rhyme. :) good job.
myno chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
i like this one- short and gets the point across. The story you left with your review wa hilarious- laughing is good for me when i'm in this sort of mood. Well, i'm off to bed, hopefully won't cry myself to sleep tonight, lol.
Unimportant chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
Excellent piece! You know, my feet turn purple too, and so do my mom's. Mother like daughter I suppose! :) I love how symbolic this poem is. Good work!