|Reviews for Fall from Grace|
| Ftcgg45 chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
Wow. Very good idea, this could be very good if you write it well and the characters aren't too flat. I wish you the best of luck on this story, and I will be looking out for it when you update.
| Pockymon chapter 1 . 4/10/2005
Dood, Bibles are cheap. But if you're that strapped for cash, Google for Bible versions if you need reference. As the previous review said, not much to go on, but right now, you seem to be going in the right direction. My only hesitation would be not to make this angel some kinda Love Slave with no mind of her own. I don't know what kind of angel Abishah is or how old she is, but if she's a Femme Bot, I forsee the story's credibility going downhill. Godspeed!
| No Longer Use This Account chapter 1 . 4/10/2005
I thought this was an excellent opening, although it's short it gives the reader enough detail to get hooked on. Because it was so short there's not much I can say, apart from that it was excellent.