Reviews for Brother, Please
Skye Hegyes chapter 1 . 10/8/2005
Ain't it funny how this happens to most siblings? I like the poem and thought it quite followed whats going on between me and my sister. The difference is that I am the older one. Its not that I am too "cool" for her but I can't find the time to hang out with her anymore, and that seems to make it so much worse.

Amara the Warrior chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
This is a really touching poem. I think I know how it feels to see someone everyday but know they've changed. It's a really depressing feeling.
His Only chapter 1 . 5/16/2005
Oh my gosh aww! That was so SAD! I'm not gonna say that I know how you feel, cuz I don't. But I know that it has got to be tough. It might even be harder to live with someone who you love and adore when they don't give you the time of day, than to be separated from the person you love. Gosh, this poem is really getting to me. I REALLY feel for you! I hope things will change, and in the mean while, just keep clinging to your stuffed animal :) Great work with this! I really enjoyed it...

Oh, I almost forgot. I wanted to thank you SOO SOO SOO SOO much for your reviews on both my sister's poem and my Becky story. Your comments were so encouraging, somethin a writer is always happy to read. Thanks again and keep up the great work with your work!
violetskies chapter 1 . 5/6/2005
love it! really sad, tho. thanks for the reveiw! btw, i have a stuffed dolphin too! lol. *em*
ChiquitoPanda chapter 1 . 4/27/2005
This was very real. A job well done! This is such a hard experience to go through, especially alone. Keep close those memories of age ten, and don't lose hope, eventually he will come around, realizing what he is missing. You only stay 'too cool' for so long before you realize that you have let go of what really matters most, and go crawling back, begging for forgiveness and acceptance. If your brother is lucky (and I think that he is) then he will be welcomed back with open arms, and regret missing out on so much of your life. Don't lose hope. Keep writing! ~TheCryingGame
Battle Raven chapter 1 . 4/17/2005
Oh...that's so sweet...reminds me of this guy who is almost like my brother, but not quite. A really close friend who is now too "cool".
wilderness chapter 1 . 4/15/2005
touching...really touching. i loved it!lani
LunaMoonyScamp chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
-sighs- Awkward because I thought of my sister as I was reading this. With each word comes more and more pain. -nods in respect- Loved it.

Momenti and Take Luck,-Moony-
nicky475 chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
nice happens a lot i know i have an older brother
WakeRobin chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
Aww such a sad and sweet poem. I hope your brother understands how you feel and hangs out with you more soon. Keep writing!