Reviews for Chronicles Of Moonlight
bizznot chapter 1 . 7/6/2005
Not a _bad_ story, but it needs alot of work. To begin with, your character appears to be recapping the previous events, but you describe a fight scene like it was happening then and there. A little less detail, like someone might recap it to an odd friend
Magnus Wolfbane chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
loved it...never stop writeing this was great