Reviews for Let Me Smile
Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 4/30/2005
It's like I can see the rain.
izzy chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
interesting poem, its a relaxed suicide isnt it? very good, i specially like da last 2 lines... finally in peace... its a good way 2 die...
AmaranthineMisery chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
well written.. i could see the scenario in my mind... i like it
Rose of Darkness 666 chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
The overall effect of this poem was removed in part by my friend reading it out loud in a sarcastic voice. Sorry. I still thought it was really good, though in places the repitition seemed a bit much. The imagery and suicide themes really make it a powerful peace.