Reviews for Fruitless
Waterscribe chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
Hello! Well I finally reviewed. This is a good poem. You may want to consider where you break your lines. It gets a little dizzy. Other than that, I really liked this!
iwul chapter 1 . 5/6/2005
/She is Infinitely more dangerous than he could ever aspire to be/

this is the line
hit chapter 1 . 5/4/2005
heyi reviewed finally! great poem. i liked it a lot.I can't think of anything that can be improved. Good Job! love yahit
Homie G Wanna chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
As usual, another magnificent work. What can I say... you were made to write. :)...
euphonia chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
Nice! I loved it - wonderful vocab and beautiful wording. For the most part, great rhythm too. I love all of your stuff; keep writing!