Reviews for Closed Door
Damaged chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
This is such an amazingly powerful poem. I relate to this so much ... I know what it's like to wait for the night to be able to fall apart and cry ... you wrote this beautifully. You really brought out the emotion that so many individuals go through their entire lives. Keep this up!
Sarah-Brighteyes chapter 1 . 5/22/2005
I think this piece can touch alot of people out there who just hide who they really are and what they really feel behind the comfort of their skin. Very good piece. I love the flow and the sort of message I got from it. Bravo to you once more in your piece. Relatable works.
redsage chapter 1 . 5/3/2005
beautiful.
GreyEyedScrewUp chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
wow... that was deep. And i think everyone can relate to that somehow. Awesome!
Heartbroken Fool chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
hey its michelle! girl, u can write! haha i like this one. maddy, if this girl ur talkin bout in this poem is u, jus kno u can always talk to me! haha j/k i kno thats not u haha. great job! luv ya!
brit chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
this is really good. i think you have real talent! i thought it sounded like a she had a relly sad life. You seem to have a good way of making it sound real