Reviews for Airbrush Me
Kella Trams chapter 1 . 5/17/2005
oh, cool idea. Interesting repetition here. I wish I had more to say but that's all I can think of. It's kind of cheerful in a mocking way.
WannaBWriter chapter 1 . 4/17/2005
nice. we all want to be airbrushed. it would cover up all the bad stuff and display all the good. good poem.
Simply Stupid chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
I'm not sure i understand the last line. I like the idea, but I think that the poem is a bit too literal and it would benefit from a bit more development of the idea of airbrushing your personality and hurt etc so that no one can see what's underneath... sorry, that's just an opinion. I love the theme of air brushing. I may write my own poem on the subject, but i won't put it on fp. The lines like "hide the truth" need development and the more literal ones like "make me sexy" or "hide my age" could be condensed into less stanzas because some of it is a bit too repetitive. I hope you haven't taken offence, it is a very good poem, just trying to help...x
I Found Myself At 24 chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
Very nice. It flowed well and I love the idea you're working with. Excellent job and thanks for your review as well!
GothicSpook chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
I like it! So true! I dont see the point in airbrushing! Evveryone should be proud of their scars and wrinkles, they show people who have lived their life!

Ps: Thank you for the review!