|Reviews for Just a Girl|
| cosmo-queen chapter 1 . 4/18/2005
Good work! The vulnerability really comes through in this, and your repetition of "I'm just a girl" emphasises your point. And thanks for your review a while back :)
| subtle1 chapter 1 . 4/14/2005
Hey! I wanted to thank you for reading and reviewing "Transparent As Glass". I can relate to this poem...it's really well written.
| ckk chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
This is a good piece of work, If it's really about your life you shouldnt' need to hide that you're a girl. Keep writing its good.
| black-tear-stained chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
Although it was written well, I don't like the way you would say something negative or helpless and then after that say "I'm just a girl"- it comes off as the whole "woman are the weaker sex" type of thing. I't as if you are ashamed to be yourself and to be a girl. I think it would b a good idea to maybe switch it around to say that ( if it is about yourself) a guy couldn't handle you. ( maybe it is the whole "JUST a girl...that gets me) yeah, just take out the "just" other than that, great
| Samantha Cleary chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
Nice. I liked this one a lot. Reminded me of me. I'll have to r&r some more of your stuff! Keep up the great work! -
| Simply Stupid chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
Love the last lines! In fact, the whole poem is great! However, i have to say GIRLS ROCK! Chin up! You're stronger without him in the end! And you are far stronger THAN him! You are female! You are probably gorgeous, and obviously clever because of your poetry, so stand up and be strong... WE DON'T NEED MEN!(sorry, raging feminist...all the guys on this site are now gonna hate me... and call me a hypocrite for my poetry! Whoops!) x
| ifitaintkatie chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
Beautiful. *reads* I do enjoy this poem. A lot. And I'm sounding far too posh for myself. I am well impressed with this. Keep writing!