Reviews for Betrayer
emilyrachel18 chapter 1 . 1/25/2006
I've just found a poem i haven't read yet yippee! I like the begining of this poem babes and the ending is excellant too, i think in places the rythm is out ever so slightly but the emotion that is evident in it is amazing. Plz rite some more!
xHannahx chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
**hugs** i cant imagine how you must feel right now, but whatever's going on you have my very best wishes. brilliant poem btw.

queenvixta chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
I like this a lot. Beautiful piece. I just really like it and it's great! Rock on, QueenVixta.
Damo chapter 1 . 4/15/2005
Hey Allycred, Alex,Brilliant poem. I can't find the right words to describe it. Hope Your Well. Ian Says Hi and He also loves the poem. Best Wishes, Damien
Rosanna28 chapter 1 . 4/14/2005
Aww, I'm so sorry you have to go through something like this. I know what it's like when a friend (especially a best friend) who does that to you...It sucks so much.

But this poem, it's so beautiful and full of emotion. I really, really loved it!

I hope everything will get better for you and your friend and that you work everything out. _

Much love, Rosanna.
Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
Very powerful emotions, it jsut hit me. I had this problem as well with one of my friends,I hope that yours ends better then mine. Also don't be sorry, its good that you wrote this. This is a very powerful piece and that makes it one of your best in my books.

Keep it up.
Keith Andrew chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
Thats good alex. i hope you too are okay with each other...-Keith Andrew I love you
angel-of-woe chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
very nicley written i could feel the emotion floweing thru it as i read, good one!
Kressida chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
I'm sorry, so sorry... i just hope you'll forgive me for what ive done someday. this was beautiful and so sad, it made me cry too.. once again, im so so sorry my bestfriend, although i dont know if you still want me as yours.. ill always love you and youll always have a special place in my heart. if not, im glad i was lucky enough to know you.. love Zai
twistedtruths chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
Great poem, I really felt your pain in it.I really hope things work out with your best friend. But I'm sure if you are really best friends and care for each other you'll find a way to get through it.
putz-6 chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
this is a great poem you put alot of emotion into it good job _
dancingintherain chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
i can feel the pain you had while you wrote this...its very strong and raw with emotion...

aww, love comes and goes, friends are forever...if she cares about you, and you care about her, it won't be the end...

hope everything turns out okay...

lovely poem by the way...

Mafortion chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
Very nicely written!
The System Mother chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
Hm, strong and meaningful. Good job.
Rascarin chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
The poem is beautifully written, I can feel the pain...

Hope things work out for you...