Reviews for The Light
Clap Clap Raise Your Hands chapter 1 . 5/26/2005
wow, this is so cool, i really like this one, it made me smile, also because it reminds me of a poem i wrote about hate when i was about 12 where one line was "you are a burnt cookie no one will eat" hah! i still keep meaning to slip that line in my work somewhere, keep a look out for it i say, it's gona be famous! ...

(*returns to rocking in chair*)

x weasel within x
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
aw very sweet metahpors
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
wow, nice imagery great job on this sonnet it's very real adn soothing at parts

keep writing!
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
wow. i like all the metaphors and everything. that's really nice and sweet:) i hope whoever you write it for reads it