|Reviews for Magically Disappear|
| The Fourth Fate chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
*Clap clap clap* Bravo. This is beautiful. I love the repition. The title is what really caught my eye. Crafting and interesting and attention grabbing title is no small feat.
| lyingdreamer chapter 1 . 5/19/2005
Times as such are such a temptation for escapism.
| gypsylass chapter 1 . 5/1/2005
oh wow, its a great poem, my favorite lines are 'i don't want this pain anymore/ i want it all to go away'...keep up the good work.
| thedarkthatiwas chapter 1 . 4/14/2005
Oh I like. So emotional, but in a good way, an effective way. V/good!
| Narijima chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
Very nice! It flows very nicely, and carries a lot of emotion with it. I like the line "drowning in the pain," as I think that it is very true.
I will definitely be checking out some of your other work!