Reviews for Battle Alone
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
Aw...felt the same way... Very creative!
Narijima chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
Another wonderful poem! I can relate to the feeling you portray here.

I like the repetition of the line "Why am I never fought for?" Definitely drives your point home.

Excellent job!
lordelfy chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
good poem!
catseyeview chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
Felt...the cry we seem to all bear at times. It is emotionally evoking in its simple language, it is like listening to the inner voice sing its pain. Great work!