Reviews for Charles, Duc de Villiers
Soviet chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
I like the last two lines, and the flow is okay.

My only problem is... why such short one-word lines?
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
nice
Fabian Cortez chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
Simple and yet so beautifully rendered.

Well Done

KEEP WRITING!

F.C
cosmo-queen chapter 1 . 4/18/2005
Lovely imagery and written in such an original style. Great work :)

*cosmo-queen*
Plato's Socialist Democracy chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
your hand is your ballroom, dance to your hearts delight, as the starlight from your great poetry gives ilumination to your life.

sigh

if only i could read

PSD
Skeleton Key chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
Wow...cool...I don't have the time to write one of my trademark reviews for this poem. Do email me however, I would like to clear some things up.
Rebecca Kelsey chapter 1 . 4/15/2005
WOW, so incredible! The last line just blew me away, I wasnt expecting it.
catseyeview chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
just beautiful...on my fav. story list!
thedarkthatiwas chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
Neat. Neat. I like!
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
Very nice.
tablesalt chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
I like it. It's nice and short - gets to the point.
Made in U.S.A chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
gah thats beautiful. keep writing :D
dustytiger chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
this is a really interesting peice, not sure what else to say but thank you for sharing