Reviews for Missing
Rowan MacKenzie chapter 1 . 5/10/2005
Good job! Don't listen to The Magician (just jealous of you!)! You are a wonderful writer! Keep it up!
DiffusedBlues chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
I'll contact you if I find... you? Yes.
Clap Clap Raise Your Hands chapter 1 . 5/4/2005
wow i love the ending! so unexpected! i like how this poem can make me kinda SEE what its saying, like i can picture myslf looking high and low etc, nice poem x weasel within x
ShadowNemesis chapter 1 . 5/4/2005
*nods head in assent* Good job

-ShadowNemesis
Fading Flower chapter 1 . 4/28/2005
Haven't reviewed you in a while. Good poem! And I agree with everyone...the ending was good.
Dancinggal5389 chapter 1 . 4/28/2005
Very short and to the point. The ending was suprising and made me think
swtdreamz101 chapter 1 . 4/27/2005
this is cute, yeah i hate it when i can't find something when i need it, nice poem
Maxwell K chapter 1 . 4/26/2005
Awesome! I love the last line twist! well written
ChintzyHoyden chapter 1 . 4/26/2005
awesome poem...LoVE the ending
DementedOracle chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
This is a very good example of how a short poem should be. Through its brevity it boasts a very clear, thought-provoking point. Though only eight lines, it is absolutely complete. Good writing. That last line was perfect.
Unfairy chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
"Where did I go?"That is an interesting resolution. It is a simplistic poem with not much to it, but the last line gives it an extra depth.

ps. I'm writing a book, check it out!
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
Ah, searching for the self. Will it ever end?
Angels-In-My-Heart chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
just WOW it hits way close to home in me and I love It Keep writing
inferno tempest chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
great, superb
lifescrewsusall chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
haha i like the last line. good job
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