Reviews for The Dust of You
r4d10fly3r chapter 1 . 5/3/2005
another good one. i especially love when a poem has a stinger like this one, i always try to put one (sometimes subconsciously) but you did it very well. beautiful
Spiral Artist chapter 1 . 4/14/2005
Speed Strid once said; "You struggle against yourself by living in the dust!"... Think about it.
laughter at the funeral chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
oh this is illusional beloved?...good theme...although i think the breaking of the lines could be better to improve the rhythm and readability...

truly yours...

PS: i have a reflection of this poem in my piece Hello Stranger...pls do chack it out...
AuthorNinjaEarth chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
Oh, beautiful, wonderful! This reminds of something I had experienced before. I can share the pain with you in this poem cause it gets personal! Thanks for sharing this, it was marvelous. Keep up the excellent work!