Reviews for Their Priorities Lie
ShadowPharoh chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
i like alot! _

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simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
interesting & true about a lto of ppl
nine iron chapter 1 . 4/14/2005
I chose the flow to be as it is on purpose, lies are never smooth, they always have sharp edges.
Munchin chapter 1 . 4/14/2005
I like the idea but I think this piece needs some work. the line sdont flow very well .. I mean together it seems kind of jerky and funny but I really like how you went short and striaght forward.
catseyeview chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
strong and with a heart of conviction
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
nice!