brilliant.

adorable and sassy at the same time. way to go!

tears. my only reaction, tears. adding to favourites. amazing.

very creative brand of poetry. not as heart wrenching, but probably more powerful for the way you take something so close to you and describe it in a way that should tear you apart, and then offer it up. to sell your ..every cigarrette is doing me damage, but every love is killing truth prevails.

kitten xx

Wow… that was impressive. I loved it. Definitely my favorite by you, I’d say. It was so beautiful and so unique. I loved the first line, the last line, and the directions part. VERY good work. Never stop writing.

wow what a relly good poem. you are a really talented poet. keep it up!

I think that's sweet

Very interesting

*claps* very, very well done. it's so...original...so...emotional (if you look at it my way)...so...powerful. i love it! it's going on my favs list!

That was awesome and original. I love it. That could be on a Hallmark card. Really, it could. Absolutely lovely.

What a beautiful poem. I love the intriguing images you create. Keep up the amazing and gorgeous work.

PS Thanks for the review!

Very cool idea. I like it.

A most unusual love poem and definitely one that stands out. Particularly thought 'indignity branded', magnetic closure to smiles' and 'internal cuts with matching shoes' as vivid and unique. Smashing.

oh, oh. i love the imagery here. bittersweet and coldly lovely.

Hahahaha xD I just loved this, I dunno, but at some strange point it made me laugh, maybe I'm nervous lol good job and thanx for the review! I'll add this one to my favs!