Reviews for Chokes Time
xLilyx chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
Nice, we all want time to stop. I like the run on's, emphasises the never ending time thing. Gah, stopping, this is beginning to sound like Eng lit...
Aeritone chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
I thoroughly enjoy this poem as well. Short poems usually pack the biggest punch with its wording and imagery.

In response to your thoughtful review, I usually like to explore FP when I'm bored, and through one person's 'favourite authors' list, I found your work.

As well, you mentioned Brantford in your review...how did you know I was from that area? Small world...

Longest review ever...sorry about that. _

-Sarah/Aeritone
LauraKM chapter 1 . 5/2/2005
If only it were possible. I love the hour glass idea you've used here and the metaphor of sand in the mechanism is fab.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
This is unique in its depiction and format.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
interesting
Maxwell K chapter 1 . 4/15/2005
cool
Munchin chapter 1 . 4/14/2005
um.. this is good!
catseyeview chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
O' how you are speaking to me! Strong words fill this heart! -Christine
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
awesome desc.!
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
Fascinating, it took on more then one theme for me. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.