Reviews for Our Once Upon a Time
Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 4/14/2005
For some reason, it strikes me as refreshingly honest. Wonderful job. chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
This is very good. Very romantic and... I don't know, happy. I like it
Cecil Wazowski chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
Hmm... nice. I like it, even though it is a love poem. :) The image of the "idealistic magnets" does not seem to fit well with the rest of the poem, which is rather cosmic (or at least abstract). I really liked a lot of your images, and your diction serves the purpose well. Nicely done!