|Reviews for One Rose, Two Thorns|
| emily chapter 1 . 9/5/2005
once more an excellant peice i truely belive you get better with each poem you write. I particuarly like the ending when you put in the nursery rhyme it really adds to the effect of the poem and adds emphasis on what your saying. keep it up!as an after thought i was wondering if you could write a positive poem to override the despair that is in the majority of your poems. as you know mine are full with despair so i'm attempting to branch out into a happier field you should try it! it makes writing more of a challenge when you have to see the positive without being soppy. I know you are a truely gifted poet and can achieve anything you put your mind to
| Moonjava chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
This is wonderfuel. Love the wording.
| untilI chapter 1 . 5/20/2005
Another great piece! And I loved the title. Haven't we all been in the position before? ::sighs:: and I'm in it now. I think this got so many reviews not only for your grand writing style, but for how well you describe the situation.
| Anthony Bailly chapter 1 . 4/28/2005
Wow, strong, slighly confusing and definitely needs a re-read to get the full pic, but its def a super poem
| Ahemait chapter 1 . 4/25/2005
it was interestign how you fit the nursery rhyme into the poem. at first i didn't like it, because it messed up the sequence. but then i read it over, and changed my mind. another perfect poem! how yoou ever shown any of your work to someone professional? i know it's 'dark' (as they might say) but they're really, really good. you have talent that someone really NEEDS to see
| arcane devices chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
nice, possibly your best work yet. -ADD
| Out-Of-Reality chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
Obvious conflict created. I love the title and especially the parody of the ring around the posies song. Very brilliant. Defenitely one of my favs by you
| inferno tempest chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
great it was absolutely great!
| Kakyou Takashiro chapter 1 . 4/15/2005
beyond... the... spacing... i suppose i'll leave with this. pure perfection.
| Memoir chapter 1 . 4/15/2005
"my heads desire is my hearts worst fear"
After reading your bio, it got me kind of worried. I know you're not exactly a "buddy" or anything, but I hope you're feeling better :( Take care of yourself! I agree with moon-chaser, there is a chaotic feel towards this poem.. :) nice work
| Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 4/14/2005
Great poem, I loved it. There is a confused order here that can only come from a fight between the head and the heart. I love the idea or thorns and roses, they are very underused at times like this. I hope you reslove your problems.
Keep it up.
| hellokittychic31 chapter 1 . 4/14/2005
this absolutely beatiful...i think its one of the best ones you've ever written! i love the whole rose/thorn idea, and the rind around the rosie part w/ the last line...you did a wonderful job...
hope you can figure your feelings out...(hint: listen to your heart...)
i kno, i kno, easier said than done...
| putz-6 chapter 1 . 4/14/2005
this poem was amazing _
| Maxwell K chapter 1 . 4/14/2005
There iss a reason why your on my fav. authors list and it's cause of works like this! Well written! I love it!
| Rosanna28 chapter 1 . 4/14/2005
Omg! This is so beautiful! I loved the line 'My heads desire is my hearts worst fear' Really really awesome! You're a GREAT poet. Way better than me. Just beautiful!
Much love, Rosanna.