Reviews for Carnival
FictionPressPenName chapter 1 . 10/20/2005
I'm so sad now... That was really good. It's just everything is so well written. I'm sorry, I'm really trying to find something that could be fixed and not just say it was great, but I can't find anything. Keep it up!
binderem chapter 1 . 7/27/2005
It blew me away. The title, Carnival, is perfect because it sort of sets the stage for the rest of the poem. Very nice.
Opticalillusions chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
Wow, fantastic. I really liked the use of a carnival, rather than taking the traditional "broken mirror image". Really intresting.
Unholy Haven chapter 1 . 5/1/2005
Another good one! I like the strength of emotion here.
IarannCros chapter 1 . 4/25/2005
'This game is now over, I'm done waiting for you'NE, pretty! I want to steal it! Can I at least doodle it onto one of my binders? :P
Poppy Pyres chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
i love the ferris wheel metaphor
Miss Impossible chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
Emotional and touching. Simply beautiful. As you can see I like it a lot! Please keep you very much for the review of my poem "The Green Eyed Monster", which means a lot to me. :)Siouxsie x
Marth Azumi chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
Damn, this was pretty damn emotional, and the imagery and metaphors were...like, perfect.

Anyway, not much more to say than this blew me away, and keep writing, or whatever shit you may wanna hear.
Infection chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
Another great poem.
arcane devices chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
nice play on words but what really hooked me in was the inner meaning. Great job kokoro! -ADD
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
i can realte.. awesome job
Rozovian G chapter 1 . 4/18/2005
Well, it's strong. That's good. "The shadows of your deceit" - that's great. Well, poetically speaking. I say you've got talent, girl. *appaluse*
JSCreed chapter 1 . 4/17/2005
Good to see an author write truthfully. Many do, many don't. Those who don't never really get the words right. These words were very good.

JSC
inferno tempest chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
superb
Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 4/14/2005
This is really powerful and the words are very strong. There are a lot of emotions and reality to it. great piece!

Sorrow
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