Reviews for Save Me, Oh Brave Protector |
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![]() ![]() ![]() 5 years?! Wow. I never thought, after reading it all, she is that untrustful. And really? Sending cards on your Birthday and Christmas means "something good", after all it's an unspoken rule that you should not destroy someone's mood in these wonderful days.. doesn't her brilliant mind know that at least?! I love the story, I really do. It's just that it feels, dare I say it, rushed. What I just want to say is that I have mixed feelings regarding how it had ended. The story is seriously amazing. It just sounded unfair that the soon-to-be-king is getting mature while the guard is being an entity for broken ladies and just suddenly got brought back to her senses.. it just feels like you don't give her justice, that as the writer of this story, you don't trust her enough. sorry for the rant, feel free to make me understand, that is what stories are for isn't it - to learn something? |
![]() ![]() Love this very much. The Armed Guards are simply the best! |
![]() ![]() I bet it was that bitch Hailee. Hailey. Whatever. I swear to God, I will find whoever killed Lee's family and sic my army of cats on them. To eat their face. |
![]() ![]() Oh my God...I felt so bad for Lee. Gisele Lefevre is a bitch that's probably plotting against Ryan and LEE HAD TO WITNESS IT...*sobs* I heart the story so far. Your writing is fantastic, tbh, and I really like the plot. |
![]() ![]() Mixed feelings for this chapter |
![]() ![]() I hate how she just accepts him back just like that |
![]() ![]() Nice story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow. I LOVED this story. The character development was amazing - and the importance you gave for knowing when you need to deal with something on your own is great. Wish there was an Epilogue so I could read more about Lee and Ryan. Keep writing :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like it that it took a while for Lee to be assigned as his guard :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohh cool! What an amazing world you've created :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() not bad. The cadets seem a bit too immature. You do not need to put somebody's dialogue in capitals when they are yelling- quite stupid |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it soooo much that i finished it in a single seating. It was like I couldn't tear my eyes away from the screen! Though it was rated m and i expected a little more skinship the story was great and the chemistry between them was so sweet. Sort of a tear-jerker at the end, but hey it just meant that the story was that moving. Thank you so much for writing such a great story! |
![]() ![]() I think you were too hard on Lee and too easy on Ryan all thorough the story. She deserved better, and Ryan's mistakes were brushed off as nothing and forgiven in a bit of an eye, over and over again. You could have at least let her have her family. What was the point of killing them off? Shouldn't we have seen how her career takes a turn after sacrificing her life for the Royals? Why no mention of another men in her life? She just ended up sounding too pathetic to me, Like she has been beaten up by the writer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok sorry, I'm a history nerd and you've got me a bit confused, did you mean World War Two? Because World War One ended in 1918 so your Armed Guards couldn't have been set up right after the first World War if it was set up in 1947. Sorry if I'm being a bit anal but it would annoy me during the entire story |
![]() ![]() ![]() AKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK IM IN LOVE! *tears* |