Reviews for Monster
eskimoxisses chapter 1 . 7/2/2007
I like it.
Estranged chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
Quite a warning, although not really as strong as your other works. Still well written though.
Adonia Chesser chapter 1 . 4/14/2005
It sound's like our talking about someone that going through rebellion. I thought that the way you wrote this was awsomely done. Great Job.
Youneek chapter 1 . 4/14/2005
I've looked through a lot of your poetry, and your main pitfall as a writer seems to be that you repeat the same line opener over and over and over and over and over again. Generally, that's a bad idea. It makes your reader bored, and they're likely to quit reading. Other than that, you're very talented.

Just try mixing it up some, eh? :)