Reviews for Moon
kit feral chapter 1 . 12/19/2005
"Watching the stars make way for " I get a really pretty image from this. I love the night, stars, moon- and this poem. It's beautiful, really does her justice. Wonderful work, keep it up.
Herminia chapter 1 . 12/19/2005
An excellent way to describe the moon.
Aidos Nemesis chapter 1 . 10/27/2005
I love your imagery; you make it possible to see that door in the night sky opening to reveal the moon. Keep up the good work!
Scales of Sapphire chapter 1 . 6/20/2005
Love your imagery and metaphors. I love night time... Happy Writing!
Cloud Burst chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
lovely!
catseyeview chapter 1 . 5/31/2005
again, beautiful...
this is britt chapter 1 . 5/28/2005
this made me yearn for warm nights so I could just stare at the moon again. wonderfully done- not overstated at all.
Silence the Storm chapter 1 . 5/25/2005
Wonderful. Beautiful, short and sweet. Perfect work.
Edraith chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
Really beautiful, you create a lot of atmosphere with a few lines. The poem reminded me of Keats. Lovely.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
beautiful
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 4/18/2005
Mozart's diva—moon,

Queen of the night ringing out,—

In the Magic Flute.

—From a dream obscured,

Came Selene to soothe my woes,

Soft, silver, singing.

—She's gone to bed now,

Coverlets of white down clouds,

Took the stars with her.

—¿How can I love Her?

Nightly She flirts with tall stars,—

Her face—radiant.
the twinkling of an eye chapter 1 . 4/17/2005
This is very nice. Like the imgery and metaphors. (I have a metaphoric poem on night too, only the moon is the king in mine). anyway, good job.
lime215 chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
perfect immagry of the moon.
Kenishiro chapter 1 . 4/15/2005
I have to say, though the poem was a simple one, yet it was beautifully written, love it, cheers to the good work, keep it up!