Reviews for 10 More Minutes With You |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Haha I get the main character, everyone fakes a bit, even if they say that they are "real". Haha I'd like to read more.. |
![]() ![]() like the story. like to read some more of it. more chapters please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, brilliant, just stumbled onto yours and i really like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() You will write another chapter to this and then another after that... and so on. the way you described everything is so realistic, you would believe that it could happen in real life. like your main character Jen, she's not the typical 'I am so incredibly gorgeous and hot and my life is perfect' type. It's believable and it would be oh-so cool if you wrote another chapter or five. -Seraphic Deviltry |
![]() ![]() Ack! Please update soon. D: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, great chapter. Adrienne sure has guts, I can't wait to see what will happen next. There were one or two minor mistakes, but nothing really major that messes up the story itself. Update soon please. |
![]() ![]() This looks like its goin to be really good. I like the way you've made Jennifer quite realistic- she has flaws, its so much better than the typical Mary Sue character. Look forward to seeimg when you update. |
![]() ![]() that was the best story i have ever read |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update! Update! Update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this story is that all of it or is there more? i hope theres more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey i ran across this fic today, this is really good. are you going to continue the story. it is really good. |
![]() ![]() wheres the other chapters? .. i want more .. gimme more _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, I like this story. Adrienne is my kinda girl! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! you're so... deep...? ...i think? ...anyways, you've got cool ideas and wicked style, so you're pretty cool :) ...adios, chica! -INK- |
![]() ![]() GO! Continue on...eventually. i do have patience. and it's good so far! i like the poem in the beginning. |