Reviews for 10 More Minutes With You
Affair chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
Haha I get the main character, everyone fakes a bit, even if they say that they are "real". Haha I'd like to read more..
shhh chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
like the story. like to read some more of it. more chapters please.
sneekie chapter 1 . 9/5/2007
wow, brilliant, just stumbled onto yours and i really like it
Seraphic Deviltry chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
You will write another chapter to this and then another after that... and so on. the way you described everything is so realistic, you would believe that it could happen in real life. like your main character Jen, she's not the typical 'I am so incredibly gorgeous and hot and my life is perfect' type. It's believable and it would be oh-so cool if you wrote another chapter or five.

-Seraphic Deviltry
Lila chapter 1 . 11/23/2006
Ack! Please update soon. D:
Lady DreamWriter chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
Wow, great chapter. Adrienne sure has guts, I can't wait to see what will happen next. There were one or two minor mistakes, but nothing really major that messes up the story itself. Update soon please.
Green Eyes chapter 1 . 5/20/2006
This looks like its goin to be really good. I like the way you've made Jennifer quite realistic- she has flaws, its so much better than the typical Mary Sue character. Look forward to seeimg when you update.
madeline chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
that was the best story i have ever read
I Dance In The Rain chapter 1 . 1/18/2006
Update! Update! Update!
denise05 chapter 1 . 1/13/2006
i love this story is that all of it or is there more? i hope theres more
lostbug chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
Hey i ran across this fic today, this is really good. are you going to continue the story. it is really good.
amanda chapter 1 . 8/19/2005
wheres the other chapters? .. i want more .. gimme more _
rdfng chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
Ooh, I like this story. Adrienne is my kinda girl!
IntentionallyLeftBlank chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
wow! you're so... deep...?

...i think?

...anyways, you've got cool ideas and wicked style, so you're pretty cool :)

...adios, chica!

-INK-
muchluv4someone chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
GO! Continue on...eventually. i do have patience. and it's good so far! i like the poem in the beginning.
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