Reviews for Deceive
Dameavar chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
I really liked the descriptions you engraved into the poem. There also was alot of structure but alot of free verse at the same time. I loved the blooming flower part. The word choice was very good. Overall good poemP.S- I've updated my novel Red Eyes quite a few times, if you want to read and review it. Please tell me what you think.

-Dameavar-
MexicanGirl chapter 1 . 4/15/2005
i can realte to ur poem. good job on it i like simile 'like a blooming flower parting from weeds'