|Reviews for Sin|
| SilentRiver chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
My favorite line is "It's not gold,/ although it gleams", which I think is perfect imagery.
| Amelia Grant chapter 1 . 9/13/2005
-huddles in a corner- -shrugs and returns to the desk chair- great work! very interesting, and you've got good wording, format, etc. nice job here
| Manna Banana chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
cool i loved it
| RedXfire chapter 1 . 5/30/2005
Cool but i always thing its hard to truely understand a cutter o well iv had a good firend who did that ...
| decayinglife chapter 1 . 5/21/2005
Hi baby,this was awesome, i loved it, it is on my fav story and fav author, and alert list. i love the repitition of the lines slice me open and so forth. i really loved
| Ahemait chapter 1 . 5/11/2005
wow, amazing! that was very very good. i dun know why its in bold and italics, but whatever. the ending was especailly great, but the the rest was not anything less impressive. excellent job!
| account not in use chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
The 'Slice me open/From end to end/Pour your salt into/My wounds again' is incredible, and really conveys what you're trying to say.