My favorite line is "It's not gold,/ although it gleams", which I think is perfect imagery.

-huddles in a corner- -shrugs and returns to the desk chair- great work! very interesting, and you've got good wording, format, etc. nice job here

cool i loved it

Cool but i always thing its hard to truely understand a cutter o well iv had a good firend who did that ...

Hi baby,this was awesome, i loved it, it is on my fav story and fav author, and alert list. i love the repitition of the lines slice me open and so forth. i really loved

wow, amazing! that was very very good. i dun know why its in bold and italics, but whatever. the ending was especailly great, but the the rest was not anything less impressive. excellent job!

The 'Slice me open/From end to end/Pour your salt into/My wounds again' is incredible, and really conveys what you're trying to say.