Reviews for Sin
SilentRiver chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
My favorite line is "It's not gold,/ although it gleams", which I think is perfect imagery.
Amelia Grant chapter 1 . 9/13/2005
-huddles in a corner- -shrugs and returns to the desk chair- great work! very interesting, and you've got good wording, format, etc. nice job here
Manna Banana chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
cool i loved it
RedXfire chapter 1 . 5/30/2005
Cool but i always thing its hard to truely understand a cutter o well iv had a good firend who did that ...
decayinglife chapter 1 . 5/21/2005
Hi baby,this was awesome, i loved it, it is on my fav story and fav author, and alert list. i love the repitition of the lines slice me open and so forth. i really loved
Ahemait chapter 1 . 5/11/2005
wow, amazing! that was very very good. i dun know why its in bold and italics, but whatever. the ending was especailly great, but the the rest was not anything less impressive. excellent job!
account not in use chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
The 'Slice me open/From end to end/Pour your salt into/My wounds again' is incredible, and really conveys what you're trying to say.