|Reviews for 2 Testimony|
| DF103 chapter 1 . 6/4/2006
Hey, Nat! Dunno if you remember me, but we met at the FNCC, a few years ago. Saw you yesterday performing this piece at the celebration, or at least a likeness of it.
Very powerful and intense. Felt it then, felit it when I read it. Awesome. Purely.
| arienaino yume chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
incredible! it completely deserved to win!
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/20/2005
nice poem! can i comment on spacing tho? when u upload the doc and go to quickedit/preview, to single space use shift enter... like make it so two lines are on the samae line then right between them hit shift enter. sorry, hard to describe :S but that should single space it for you. nice poem btw :)
| arinaino chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
that's incredible! you da** well better win!
| Aryanda chapter 1 . 4/15/2005
maybe you could change the last line to 'this is how i lead my life!'just a suggestion. i thought it was really good.