the duck in the rain chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
God, it's amazing that I can look into this amazing peice of writing and see myself. It scares me. But this is so damn good. I...jesus, just can't get enough of it. I've read it over and over and the amazment and fear still hasn't left. Wow...Taylor
Midnight Lynx chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
well, I feel really sick now,that was growse and sad,I mean your writing is good as usual,you also made a brief reference about her not eating for 3 days which would be anerexica,Did you mean to refer to it?Wow you really did do some I read is hate in one way or another. Are you ever on a bright side? I know the answer to that question.I guess I really didn't need to ,really,I'm so envious,but better you then me.P.S glad your stomach is stronger then -LOve Guts not vomit
Eternal Gabreille chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
This story is really well writen but is very sad. I really like it though.
The Fool chapter 1 . 4/15/2005
Wasup Joe that story was really good, keep it up man. "I'm Lovin It."
JudgementMathew chapter 1 . 4/15/2005
Gosh thsi is great really freaky your writing is freaking awesome.