Midnight Lynx chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
So, I take it you already know that I'm going to say I liked it,since I do, this sounds like something that would happen at a papa roach,Rob zombie,or maybe even a disturbed that's a cool poem keep it up.P.S like I even have to tell you!lol
JudgementMathew chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
Cool poem .

Exiled-Knight chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
Very nice. Never viewed a mob with such a jocular touch.
swtdreamz101 chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
whoa kool, at first i was thinking those batons girls throw and catch, then it led me to see itz about a riot, such a great title, nice poem
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 4/15/2005
XD Brillant poem, done well and I like the use of words in this. You have a pretty good vocab. This made me smile, the title mostly. I like it, very unique and creative. Keep it up!

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