Reviews for Rain
LauraKM chapter 1 . 4/17/2005
Nice, you say alot in three lines, but for my taste it needs a little more depth. Great as it stands though.
Cloud Burst chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
wow this is superb! great choice of wording! keep up the great job!
Luna-Faye chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
Short but sweet and so true. Good work!
PirateGrrl chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
Very beautiful :D:D:D I love it. You have a way with words when it comes to expressing your views on nature.
inferno tempest chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
great haiku. nicely done. ;)
Summerdazed chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
beautiful!summerdazed
just living chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
HEY, that is a very nice poem! but you could try adding more on to it?