Reviews for Shimmer115's poetry collection |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for reviewing my poem! *gapes* You have so many reviews...WAAH! Is it me or do people not like rhyming poems these days? Anyway, great poems! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very sweet. :) I like it, you did a good job of portraying the emotion behind the "together"ness. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this one a lot, it reminds me of some of my poetry! I like the last part especially. :)One thing you might want to do is fix the typos before you post them up, makes your writing easier to read and understand. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() A wonderful collection of poems. I loved all of them. I thought 'Watching you out of the side of you eye' was particularly good.I really like your style of poetry, it's so short and poweful and punchy. |
![]() ![]() Gorgeos, but short and sweet. Long poems can be really dull. But this one is super nice! Luv it. Not as cheeful, but still loved. nina-chan |
![]() ![]() I love how it rhyms. It really paints a picture in your mind. Excellente! nina-chan |
![]() ![]() I really like your poems. They cheer me up and stuff. Maybe you should think about getting a poetry book published...? nina-chan |
![]() ![]() Another pretty addition to your collection! I like this. Your poems have great meanings. nina-chan Oh, that makes you realize. I have a poem collection, too! |
![]() ![]() Beautiful! It's short and pretty, like a poem should be. I think you have great talent, Shimmer! If you don't recognize my name, I'm Miss-Nina. You reviewed my story UDA United Dragon Agency long ago. I wanted to keep in touch. nina-chan |
![]() ![]() ![]() These are two really great poems! I like the way you make both scenes seem as though they are happening around you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() All in all...not bad. It could use a lot of improvement though. I liked your poems though:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm...I don't know how to say this but you need to balance out your poems. It's kinda hard to explain. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not bad. It could use some improvement though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well...you have some grammer errors but it WAS pretty good. Keep writing girl! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think that dreams are ways in which we escape reality. But...that's just me:) Good job. |