Reviews for Unreal
Out-Of-Reality chapter 1 . 8/26/2005
"Silver steak knife, Carving sadistic calligraphy" My favorite line. The best part of this poem was the description and how it created an extremely clear image. I saw a girl crying at the foot of her bed with her hands clasped together like she was praying and crying. I'm astounded!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
powerful
zamthezombieman chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
wow, some kick ass imagery,kinda creepy in a way...I have nothin bad to say about it, so...there.
sweet raptured light chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
loved it, especially the way you incorporated the prayer into it. It gave me chills, keep up the good work
xoxoMizzatxoxo chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
great!i have a poem somewhat like that ive considered posting and now i think i will