Reviews for The Gears of Something Timeless
The Rain's Kiss chapter 1 . 6/21/2005
Honestly, I love this poem. It kind of reminded me of an Alice-in-Wonderland type of them. (I hope that doesn't offend you.) I know this doesn't have anything to do with that. .. but the mentioning of the rabbit, tea, clock, and something about "combing the butterflies out of my hair" reminded me of how creeped out that movie made me. The whole thing, even though it was a dream, seemed more like what someone would see if they were on a hallucinogen or something. (Sorry this is so long, and once again I hope I don't offend you by saying this.)In your summary you said not really a poem, but I think it could be. All's you really need to do is break it up and it can be placed in the free verse category of poetry. I love it. Nice job!
Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 4/17/2005
So haunting; like a dream. Wonderful, wonderful.
BestSkeptic chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
forbidden passion chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
this was amazing. so many ideas and thoughts flying around, i loved it. very original! i wouldn't be suprised if this was in text books in the future.