|Reviews for Spike|
| Crystalryu chapter 1 . 4/17/2005
Wow- simply amazing. The thing that I can't get over enough is the complete originality of what you've set up. At first reading this is a bit rocky, mostly because of all the descriptiveness, but thats okay and is expected. What you've got going here has enormous potential to grow, which I hope it does because I will most definitely be back for more. Not many errors I picked out, just make sure to explain things more gradually as the story plays out. Can't wait for more!
Whats going to happen to Spike? :/