|Reviews for Unraveled|
| scudcrow chapter 1 . 4/18/2005
Great imagery summed up in short lines...shows how time can take its , order rests even in the world of chaos.
Je l'aime, very well written!
| Forsakn chapter 1 . 4/18/2005
pretty imagery C i don't know if this was done on purpose, but how the last words of the first and last lines rhyme gives it a really nice touch.
| youzi chapter 1 . 4/17/2005
Very poignant.. loved the image of 'a moth-worn sweater In a dusty attic room'. keep writing D
| Xi Hou Jun chapter 1 . 4/17/2005