Reviews for Unraveled
scudcrow chapter 1 . 4/18/2005
Great imagery summed up in short lines...shows how time can take its , order rests even in the world of chaos.

Je l'aime, very well written!

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Forsakn chapter 1 . 4/18/2005
pretty imagery C i don't know if this was done on purpose, but how the last words of the first and last lines rhyme gives it a really nice touch.
youzi chapter 1 . 4/17/2005
Very poignant.. loved the image of 'a moth-worn sweater In a dusty attic room'. keep writing D
Xi Hou Jun chapter 1 . 4/17/2005
Nice analogy.