|Reviews for Breaking Down the Barriers|
| fresianlady chapter 6 . 4/26/2005
AH NO DONT STOP THERE! I hope she finds her mother and gets her father and her bitch of the universe step mother put away forever! And make her and Michael get together! UPDATE SOON!
| forever in blue jeans chapter 6 . 4/26/2005
Ooh! Very interesting. I have a feeling this Jessica chick is closer to Alex than we know...? Am I right? Am I?
Well, you know...not close...but maybe was at one point...or something...I'll stop rambling.
Ah! You must update soon or I will go crazy.
This chapter was really good. Don't stress too much about improving, you're doing a damn fine job. *claps*
P.S. Michael remains adorable.
| Caelest chapter 6 . 4/26/2005
I like it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
| nhatters chapter 5 . 4/24/2005
this is a great story! i love how you gradually get her to open up its well written. keep updatin!
| Shyin chapter 5 . 4/24/2005
Yay, go michael! I like him, can't wait for the next chapter.
| forever in blue jeans chapter 5 . 4/23/2005
Aw, adorable scene. They are so cute together. Michael is perfect for Alex. I can't wait to see how their relationship evolves.
A couple suggestions: Instead of having things like "After School" written to indicate a new scene, try blending it in with the story. For instance: "After school, Alex and Michael..." It would make the story flow a bit nicer.
Also, you could try elaborating a little more on the character's emotions. It would give the story more depth. Don't, however, make Alex change too quickly. So far you've been doing fine, but I don't want to see her do a complete 180 in just a few chapters.
Anyway, these are just suggestions. If you disagree, then that's fine.
Can't wait to see where the story ends up. Update soon!
| LinKat chapter 4 . 4/20/2005
Good stuffies so far. Keep up the good work!
| navaura chapter 4 . 4/20/2005
This is a good story. You mis-spelled realize. You could use a little more discription in your work but non the less it's really good. Just elementary mistakes. I think you have good potential!well that's allI'll be looking forward to reading 's allNavaura
| forever in blue jeans chapter 4 . 4/20/2005
Good story. Depressing, but good. There are a few spelling and grammatical errors, but other than those few, this is pretty well written.
My name is Alex. Thought I'd let you know that, heh.
| Izzy chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
I love your story! The only thing is that you are freaking me out! I'm guessing we've never met...so how does your character resemble me so much? I may not have abusive parents (that's good!), but I'm really lonely and I read alone too...coincidence?
Anyways...keep up with the good work!
| FrozenWaterFaerie chapter 3 . 4/19/2005
It is long. Yay! Um... this chapter was very sentimental.
| Shyin chapter 3 . 4/19/2005
Tear, Go Michael, i like him. I really like the story and i hope you update soon!
| FrozenWaterFaerie chapter 2 . 4/18/2005
You're a very good writer. It's kind of a sad story so far...
| Lazy-anji chapter 1 . 4/17/2005
Hey, I liked it! I feel so bad for Alex though. But I can't wait to read more :)