Reviews for Shades of Truth
Islandbreeze chapter 3 . 5/2/2005
The questions in the beginning of this chapter were well placed and very interesting, I loved how you echoed the beginning to the end with the last line. One thing, even if she had been taught witches were so evil all her life, I would think her emotions would be more jumbled before killing her mother. You did a good job with her reaction afterward, but maybe before she could have a little more conflict? I liked it all anyway, very nice job
Islandbreeze chapter 2 . 5/2/2005
Wow, that was pretty vicious with the aunt, I'd expect her to be more confused with what to do in a situation like that, but you keep adding her humanity when she talks about how she would never kill a human.
Islandbreeze chapter 1 . 5/2/2005
I really liked how you mentioned people thought witches were just made up to scare people, it seemed to add atmosphere, and I like your characters too- Romy is an interesting name. Good ending too suddenly mentioning the mother- going on to next chapter. Very neat beginning