awesome

i love this...amazing...so much in just these three lines...well done...i love it. lots of love ~AllyCred~

It reminds me of Harry Potter...I don't know if that's what you intended, but it does nonetheless. I'm such a loser (walks away, head bowed in Harry-Potter-loving shame).

hey this is really good. i am doing a poetry project and i am suppossed to have poems from other authors in it so i was wondering if i could use this in it. if you would allow it (and don't worry i won't plagerise) then please email me at or im me at mortalityboresme thanx

Simple, elegant, yet you've expressed so much action. Comes out as vivid and clear, crystal ;)

I really like this :)Its simple, the pearls remind me of whole thing sort of whispers its Im making sense anyway, I really like this!A job well done:)