Reviews for Lancelot's Last Hours
Megan Maydell chapter 1 . 7/1/2006
I think this piece is absolutely perfect. The words flowed so beautifully in painting this picture. Definitely personalizes the sometimes trite stories of King Arthur.
Cher Armstrong chapter 1 . 8/12/2005
Emmy, this is positively BEAUTIFUL! I'm loving it! *gives Lancelot a nicwe big hug*
Mouse chapter 1 . 4/28/2005
"When our eyes connected, all barriers fell to the ground, and I saw a man broken, a face shrouded in nothing but raw, unadulterated anguish."

Particularly loved that bit, and all of this piece was very beautiful. The characterization is quite excellent, and I could feel the emotions of pain and betrayl very intimately. Your diction, as well, is tremendous; and your progression from each idea to the next is smooth and flowing.

You are a fantastic writer! Thank you for sharing your work.
Blue Eyes At Night chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
very pretty...i wrote a shakespearian style poem about them...quite long but this shares a few strings of similarity to mine so i think that's cute...they are one of the most tragic coulpes in literature.

well done
alineofprose chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
That was simply breathtaking. A fantastic piece, and very good character development.