Reviews for Does My Silence Need A Crime
Unholy Haven chapter 1 . 4/28/2005
I really love the beginning part of this, and the end. Some beautiful lines are written here!
Jo Madden chapter 1 . 4/26/2005
This is very interesting. Keep it up.

JB Madden
Soviet chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
umm.. I've read better from you.. it had good imagry but the MJ reference was just stupid in my opinion and the Joan d'Arc reference seemed needless.
Lela Hunter chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
I love the way you describe everything that's going on in this poem. It just flows beautifully.

The Magician Joseph chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
Damn (exuse my french) you are fucking amazing, you and about two others have work that just screams wonderful you are going on my favorites list. Wonderful work. Nice imagery and truthful.
Plato's Socialist Democracy chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
Brilliant! Seattle...that explains more than you think it would doesn't , that was good.

7.8 out of 10

Skyless Stars chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
Wow. That's the only word I can think of.

I liked the way you made a new line for a word. It gave the poem a kind of choppy rhythm, something I found went very well with the poem.

I loved this very much _

I especially like the last line.

Overall comment: Excellent. faves.
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
I thought it was an interesting concept...well done!
l057 1n51d3 chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
beautiful. i loved it. keep writing.

TheQueenOfSpace chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
O_O...COL! Ur style in writing is absolutely amazing. This was a very beautiful piece here. Keep writing!
Fabian Cortez chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
This is an absolutely beautifully written poem. Your choice of words is divine and the whole feeling to the piece is spot on throughout.

Well Done



I have a few new pieces up for your delectation. See what you think. _
thedarkthatiwas chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
Brilliant. I love your writing style, awesomeness. Very good! I like!
Spector'sGirl chapter 1 . 4/18/2005
i loved the way you formatted this piece