|Reviews for Land of Red|
| Polished Gem chapter 9 . 12/16/2020
It was a fantastic use of words to describe sexual tension. I love the way you describe things. It brings the images so vividly to my mind. I loved in the other chapter how you mentioned the sensation like something was tugging on her navel. I've never heard that described in a book before, although I'm sure we've all had that sensation before when we're nervous, or attracted to someone. Great word choice, great imagery.
| zagato chapter 19 . 1/23/2019
This is amazing, thank you!
| zagato chapter 4 . 1/23/2019
This is a wonderful story, thank you!
| Ariana chapter 12 . 5/31/2018
I've been actively reading this in every first period computers class. So addicting. I can't wait to read the next chapter-your writing is amazing.
| Serena Usagi Shields-Chiba chapter 19 . 7/8/2017
Great story, really liked the way you wrote the characters. They were all very distinct (for example the princes were very opposite in nature) but still relatable (even Ren)
Kinda stumbled upon this story, but I'm very glad that I did. Even more happy to find out that there is a sequel and elated to see you've updated recently after a long break. Loved the first half of Aliana's story :)
| ajashire1 chapter 19 . 5/9/2016
Well that was sweet.
| Strange dawn chapter 10 . 12/22/2015
LOVE Cicario's point of view
| Strange dawn chapter 9 . 12/22/2015
I liked the chapter. As for sexual tension, I thought you did a better job of it in the garden scene. Its a bit hard to do sexual tension with a virgin point of view though! :)
| sunrise21 chapter 18 . 9/23/2015
Wow, this story...the ending was beautiful! I'm so glad to see justice for all injured by Ren's evilness. Overcome evil with good. I'm also glad the king exiled her and Ti. The two of them have been through so much. A brilliant story indeed!
| sunrise21 chapter 17 . 9/23/2015
Wow, I wasn't expecting this plot. You like Ren?...speechless
| sunrise21 chapter 15 . 9/23/2015
I'm kind of disappointed with the sex scene in this chapter. all this tension you built up to this scene and I'm sorry it just fell kind of flat for me.
I expected more exploration of one another. More reaction to what was going on between them. It just seemed, quick, to quick.
In your defense, I'm trying to remind myself that time was short and the guards were outside.
| sunrise21 chapter 14 . 9/23/2015
I had a feeling Ti did not escape so easily...I hope for a happy ending...though I'd be surprised to get one.
| sunrise21 chapter 12 . 9/23/2015
Oh goodness, I hope she isn't pregnant! Refering to not eating and things like that...
Poor Man thinking the worsed about Aliana and none of it is true!
| sunrise21 chapter 11 . 9/23/2015
There first kiss was alright. Beautifully described, however a pity she was asleep! Or, so we're lead to believe. I think it is about time True Prince gets suspicious of Volim and Ren!
| sunrise21 chapter 10 . 9/23/2015
Great chapter! Awesome work! He is the True Prince, can't he just take her as his wife?