Reviews for Land of Red |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Apparently the site does not allow me to write the word R****T because that's what I wanted to say. Ren is a f***ing R****T. HOA CAN YOU LIKE HIM? I'm so piossed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know how the author like someone like Ren. He' T. He BEATS women. He's vicious. HOW THE F***K CAN YOU LIKE HIM? YOU DISGUST ME. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was a fantastic use of words to describe sexual tension. I love the way you describe things. It brings the images so vividly to my mind. I loved in the other chapter how you mentioned the sensation like something was tugging on her navel. I've never heard that described in a book before, although I'm sure we've all had that sensation before when we're nervous, or attracted to someone. Great word choice, great imagery. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is amazing, thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a wonderful story, thank you! |
![]() ![]() I've been actively reading this in every first period computers class. So addicting. I can't wait to read the next chapter-your writing is amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, really liked the way you wrote the characters. They were all very distinct (for example the princes were very opposite in nature) but still relatable (even Ren) Kinda stumbled upon this story, but I'm very glad that I did. Even more happy to find out that there is a sequel and elated to see you've updated recently after a long break. Loved the first half of Aliana's story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well that was sweet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE Cicario's point of view |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the chapter. As for sexual tension, I thought you did a better job of it in the garden scene. Its a bit hard to do sexual tension with a virgin point of view though! :) |
![]() ![]() Wow, this story...the ending was beautiful! I'm so glad to see justice for all injured by Ren's evilness. Overcome evil with good. I'm also glad the king exiled her and Ti. The two of them have been through so much. A brilliant story indeed! |
![]() ![]() Wow, I wasn't expecting this plot. You like Ren?...speechless |
![]() ![]() I'm kind of disappointed with the sex scene in this chapter. all this tension you built up to this scene and I'm sorry it just fell kind of flat for me. I expected more exploration of one another. More reaction to what was going on between them. It just seemed, quick, to quick. In your defense, I'm trying to remind myself that time was short and the guards were outside. |
![]() ![]() I had a feeling Ti did not escape so easily...I hope for a happy ending...though I'd be surprised to get one. |
![]() ![]() Oh goodness, I hope she isn't pregnant! Refering to not eating and things like that... Poor Man thinking the worsed about Aliana and none of it is true! |