my god, how do you do it? i'm writing a story out side of this site and the only way to portray how bad thing were is to have a rape scene. only i can't do it, i don't know why... how do you?

It was beautiful. I read this in one sitting. The entire story... the setting, the people, it's difficult to believe somebody who doesn't write professionally has woven this out of nothing. It's amazing. Well done, well done.

First i would like to say how much i've loved this story, its really entertained me these past few days.

The only thing is that i was really sad that Cicario and Aliana didn't end up together, but everything else in the story was fantastic!

Yes, this is the story that I have been craving for! Usually, I expect every villain to have a bit of conscience left... However, I have made an exception for Ren here. I like the contrast between Ren and Cicario. Um, I am okay with the change in POV, though I still prefer Aliana to Cicario... I am pleased that Aliana has found freedom in the end.

This is interesting I think I'm going to read this.

Hey,

First off, great story. I'm not sure if I'll ever read the sequel (this one was so perfect with its imperfect ending), but I just want to say that this was awesome.

Now, for the reason I bothered to click that little button at the bottom of the page. I am in the process of creating a world for a story I want to write. Can I borrow your idea of the red skin?

Oh, and what was your original story line that had the red skin as an important factor?

~Storm

just adding it to my favorites.

woah, i sorta liked that story. but i thought there was going to be more drama.. haha don't get me wrong, reading about aliana growing up.. it was pretty good..

ok i really need to stop putting off your story, i heard its really good. so starting tomorrow, i'm going to read the rest! )

Oh...my...gosh...poor Ti...D:

so... the story tons! but couldnt she have gotten pregnant from having sex with him?

I absolutely LOVE this, I can't wait to get started on the sequel!

-Jeweline

This was really nice and I enjoyed it very much: a well-written tale with plenty of action and a good plot. Your spelling and grammar are almost perfect as well (yeah, I'm kind of a nutcase for stuff like that). I should really get back to my own writing, but I do intend to come back and read the sequel.

I am envious...700 reviews, now that you have mine! What's a writer gotta do to get lots and lots of reviewers? :) My stats tell me I have plenty of readers, but I never hear from them. Anyway, I think you're one of the far better writers on this site, and as time permits I'll drop in to check out some of your other stories.

THis is a great story but i'm sure you already know that :)

OMG I LUV UR STORY! OMFG SOO FREKAIN SAD AT THE END! I ACTUALLY CRIED! I CANT WAIT TIL YOU MAKE THE SEQUEL AND BRING ALI AND CICA TOGETHER!