Reviews for Land of Red
sunrise21 chapter 11 . 9/23/2015
There first kiss was alright. Beautifully described, however a pity she was asleep! Or, so we're lead to believe. I think it is about time True Prince gets suspicious of Volim and Ren!
sunrise21 chapter 10 . 9/23/2015
Great chapter! Awesome work! He is the True Prince, can't he just take her as his wife?
sunrise21 chapter 9 . 9/23/2015
The sexual tension is awesome! Just, the threat of Ren is everywhere!
sunrise21 chapter 8 . 9/23/2015
I'm glad that in this chapter you state the obvious..that Aliana could have told him her situation with Ren and all would be done and over. Then we wouldn't have a story I suppose...well, maybe one in Ren dies?
sunrise21 chapter 7 . 9/23/2015
Ti should have not tried to get in to the place where the women are held. Bad move Ti! Aww, poor woman! I feel so bad for her!
sunrise21 chapter 6 . 9/23/2015
I wasn't expecting that! It seemed to happen so fast..I wouldn't mind if someone just killed Ren!
sunrise21 chapter 5 . 9/23/2015
I think it is interesting how she knows something is different, but doesn't know what.
sunrise21 chapter 4 . 9/23/2015
Aww, a nice chapter! I like Lina's character she seems nice and sweet. can't believe she'd like going to Ren the bastard.
sunrise21 chapter 3 . 9/23/2015
I want justice! I mean I hate that bastard! I'm glad she scratched him! You go girl!
I'm not stupid, I know how women aka slaves were treated but still I hate it!
Sunrise21 chapter 2 . 9/23/2015
Hello, I had an account on here but I don't know the password. So, if you wish to email me as I review your story please do! t f urban 22 at g mail dot com. I am sure you have had many reviewers!
I like your story thus far! It is interesting. The characters are believeable and so is the setting. I like your discriptions of details. Well done! Onto Ren, I do not like him! A brat he is!
Guest chapter 17 . 7/8/2015
Aliana is a huge slut.

I hate her.
Guest chapter 9 . 7/7/2015
MileyRowling chapter 19 . 12/15/2014
Nice work!
3 chapter 11 . 3/13/2014
Dominique Diane chapter 19 . 10/15/2013
Lovely story! :)
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