There first kiss was alright. Beautifully described, however a pity she was asleep! Or, so we're lead to believe. I think it is about time True Prince gets suspicious of Volim and Ren!

Great chapter! Awesome work! He is the True Prince, can't he just take her as his wife?

The sexual tension is awesome! Just, the threat of Ren is everywhere!

I'm glad that in this chapter you state the obvious..that Aliana could have told him her situation with Ren and all would be done and over. Then we wouldn't have a story I suppose...well, maybe one in Ren dies?

Ti should have not tried to get in to the place where the women are held. Bad move Ti! Aww, poor woman! I feel so bad for her!

I wasn't expecting that! It seemed to happen so fast..I wouldn't mind if someone just killed Ren!

I think it is interesting how she knows something is different, but doesn't know what.

Aww, a nice chapter! I like Lina's character she seems nice and sweet. can't believe she'd like going to Ren the bastard.

I want justice! I mean I hate that bastard! I'm glad she scratched him! You go girl!
I'm not stupid, I know how women aka slaves were treated but still I hate it!

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I like your story thus far! It is interesting. The characters are believeable and so is the setting. I like your discriptions of details. Well done! Onto Ren, I do not like him! A brat he is!

Aliana is a huge slut.

I hate her.

Aliana?

Nice work!

I LOVE IT
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FRENCH KISS

Lovely story! :)