I don't think I've ever read a 'proper' story involving a harem, to be honest. It's not something you usually stumble upon and decide to read. Your summary captured my interested though and I found myself liking this.

I like your characterisation. And the way Ti was treated (regarding his tongue and all) is something I think could be a very plausible thing to happen in scenarios such as the one where Aliana asked for his life to be spared.

Of course it was sad to see Cicario and Aliana part ways in the end (even though forcefully), but I guess that is why you've decided to publish a sequel. Thank you for writing this and I wish you all the best in the future.

Poor Aliana. Ren is such a jerk!

I'm glad that I stumbled across this story - so far, it sounds very intriguing. I was expecting it to be like most of the other slave-girl stories, with an annoying heroine and irritating master but I like Aliana and Ren's behaviour appears to have a background. I probably won't review every chapter (most likely I'll be caught up in it :D) but I will try to at least comment a few more times. I really like it so far. :) But I guess your 800 other reviewers have probably told you that already.

"The reason her skin is red is because the plot was originally going to be very, very different. Her skin had a high significance. But now you don't have to worry about all that. The plot is changed."

I don't suppose you might consider sharing what the reason used to be?

OMG, I am crying. This was soo good, and sooo sad.
You did good, no spelling errors or grammar errors.
I loved it.

Oh gosh she should know better, he's going to get caught! Oh man.

I liked the way you switched to Cicario's PoV, I really thought Aliana was dead because of this haha

This ending was so sad! But I truly did love it. The characters and the setting were all so vivid and I the story had an acceptable amount of twists and turns. I can't wait to read the sequel. Great job, definitely one of the faves :)

A great read, I really enjoyed it. Aliana has more courage and strength then she thinks, and it really showed through in the end. I fully appreciate the bittersweet ending you wrote. Much more believable that way. Thanks for sharing this story!

wow! this was incredible!

I am very displeased that she did not marry the prince! What is this, Shakespeare?

Sad story, but I like the ending. Ren got more than he deserved, but it still ended well.

But Volim is a spy! He'll tell, and then Ren will get the throne!

Poor Ti! Ren is evil. He must die a horrible death.

awww, Cicario is my ideal guy. I love him to bits. I'd love him even more if he executed his brother.